Monday, 25 November 2013

My Funny Story

My Funny Story

 This story happen when I was in the second grade of elementary school. At that time, my parents always asked me to study every night. Sometimes I pretended that I studied in my bedroom. I never studied at that time because I preferred to play with my friends to study. Although I never studied at that time, I always got the highest score in my class. For example, the score at the first semester. I got the highest score and got the first rank. But my parents always wanted me to study at home, although they knew that I always got the best score until when I was in the second grade. Finally, I tried to study after the first semester.
 I studied every day as my parents wanted, although I felt very lazy to study. I made the different method in my study every day to make my study interesting. I studied in groups, I studied while listened to music, etc. I wished I could get higher score in the second semester at that time with study every day at home. After half a year, I got the result of my second semester. Surprisingly, my score is lower than the first semester. My parents just silence saw my result. I didn't know why I got lower score, whereas I tried to study at home. After that incident, my parents never wanted me to study at home until now. hehehe that's my experience. 


*please comment if there is wrong structure, word , etc* :)

5 comments:

  1. the assignment of personal experience happen last week or this week right ?

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    1. I think,,, anything that happened in the past... :v last week or last year are not a problem

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  2. ohh like that. I am so sorry. I think it happen in last week or this week. sorry for my mistake :D haha

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  3. sorry mybe it should this week?? according to Mr. bangkit sorry :v lol

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  4. this story happen : this story happnened --> because that is something occured not to occur something.
    I preffered to play with my friends to study : i preferred to play with my friends than study --> there is comparison
    the score at the first semester : the score was the first semester --> because after that statement you put full stop, there should be to be.
    my parents wanted : my parents' desire or y parents' want --> a desire of parents

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